tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9202096189971348289.post9033310173029487935..comments2016-02-28T02:18:05.761-08:00Comments on Suzanne Hayes: It's All About the STORY!!!!Suzannehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14734532675063350517noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9202096189971348289.post-38755981842299395092011-04-13T03:49:55.737-07:002011-04-13T03:49:55.737-07:00"And then???" LOVE the way you put it. B..."And then???" LOVE the way you put it. BRILLIANT. :DSamantha Sottohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14116257082088369600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9202096189971348289.post-23211434658881627852011-04-12T12:42:30.701-07:002011-04-12T12:42:30.701-07:00So true...although I just had to do a Find and Del...So true...although I just had to do a Find and Delete in Word in my current WIP. (Still cracks me up that I have one of those...oops, two now.) The word I had to get rid of? "Then." A bit more subtlety is necesarry, but perhaps this means I'm going in the right direction?<br /><br />In the workshop I am currently taking the leader says: Action must move the story forward...He stepped on the gas pedal, peeled out of the parking lot and then...Lizahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16170701034715108039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9202096189971348289.post-73704574264313169802011-04-12T07:30:45.157-07:002011-04-12T07:30:45.157-07:00Tell me about it, plot is my downfall and somethin...Tell me about it, plot is my downfall and something I plan to work on more in my next WIP. My current WIP is a YA contemporary romance so it's pretty much all about getting the characters together with the occasional push from the plot.<br />- Sophia.Sophiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926811798176739307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9202096189971348289.post-63894503470177125672011-04-12T05:54:44.450-07:002011-04-12T05:54:44.450-07:00Loretta, Me TOO. (You know it.....) and it seems w...Loretta, Me TOO. (You know it.....) and it seems way too simple, right? Only it WORKS.Suzannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14734532675063350517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9202096189971348289.post-90679436007507718332011-04-12T05:50:52.209-07:002011-04-12T05:50:52.209-07:00Amen, sister. It's all clear now. Took me a wh...Amen, sister. It's all clear now. Took me a while, though.Loretta Nyhanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02680385300130233511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9202096189971348289.post-80780209289201801902011-04-12T05:46:24.312-07:002011-04-12T05:46:24.312-07:00YAY! Deb I SWEAR it's what we ALL need to focu...YAY! Deb I SWEAR it's what we ALL need to focus on! Crazy simple and crazy true.Suzannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14734532675063350517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9202096189971348289.post-65702342563067151372011-04-12T05:42:28.812-07:002011-04-12T05:42:28.812-07:00And then I went back to work w/a new page to page ...And then I went back to work w/a new page to page goal... (Thanks for this.)Debra Lynn Sheltonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08238268767406623274noreply@blogger.com